Dearsirsormadam,
MynameisZhangHao,Iamanofficeclerk.Oftenfeelboredandeasilygettired.Iamthinkingofjoiningaclubtochangeallthese.So,Icanfeelmoreexcitingduringmyfreetime.AndwouldliketoknowwhatconditiondoIneedtojoinyours.IhavenootherhobbiesapartfromwatchingTVafterworkandplayMahJeungwithfriendsoccasionally.PleaseletmeknowifIamallowedtobeamemberofyourclub.Lookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Thankyouverymuchfortakenyourtime.
Yourstruly,
ZhangHao
这还可以吗?
很高兴能够帮到你,希望会满意,