高二英语作文求批改!
那位高人帮忙批改一下我的英语作文(一定要有批改),
Self-introduction
MynameisY.S.H,Istudyinanarthighschool.Ilove
paintingverymuch,IhavebeenpaintingsinceIwasfiveyearsold.Myartteacher,MrsXuverylikeme,shealwayssaidtomethat“Ofveryfinequality!”or“Youareagenius”Idon’tthinkI’magenius,Ithinkit’sgenetic,becausemyfatherisacalligrapherandmygrandfatherisapaniter.
ExceptthatIhavenohabby.
I’mnotagoodstudent,becauseIalwaysfailinex-
-aminations,regardlessofMath,Englishorphysics.butIam
astudycommissionernow,butnotonlythatIhavejoinedS.U.Idon’tknowwhythis,I’mstillnotagoodstudent,
maybemyteacherwanttoencourageme.WhateverIwilltry
toimprovemyscore.
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