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【英语改错。。。高中的。。。onedayihappentofindachattingroominmyqq.therepeoplewerechattinginenglish.itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.tomysurprised,ifoundtheoralenglishofsomejuniorstudentswrebetterthanmine.i】
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英语改错。。。高中的。。。

onedayihappentofindachattingroominmyqq.therepeoplewerechattinginenglish.itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.tomysurprised,ifoundtheoralenglishofsomejuniorstudentswrebetterthanmine.iaskedhimforadviceandtheytoldmetopracticemoreonqq.buteverydayafterthatiwouldspendonehourmuoralenglishonqq.daybydayllearnedformmanyusefulwordsandexpressions.astimegoingby,ifoundthaticouldevencommunicatesomecollegestudentsfreely.

有十处错误。

帮下忙啦。

谢谢。

葛思擘回答:
  加*号处是改动的地方(给的分数有点低哦,^_^,希望可以帮到你)   onedayihappened*tofindachattingroominmyqq.where*peoplewerechattinginenglish.itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.tomysurprise*,ifoundtheoralenglishofsomejuniorstudentswrebetterthanme*.iaskedthem*foradviceandtheytoldmetopracticemoreonqq.so*everydayafterthatiwouldspendonehourmuoralenglishonqq.daybydayllearnedform*(去掉from)manyusefulwordsandexpressions.astimes*go*by,ifoundthaticouldevencommunicatewith*somecollegestudentsfreely.
侯春萍回答:
  onedayihappened(1.加ed)tofindachattingroominmyqq.where(2.改成where或在there前加,in)peoplewerechattinginenglish.itriedchatting(3.tryto尽全力做,trydoing尝试)withsomeofthem.tomysurprise(4.去d),ifoundtheoralenglishofsomejuniorstudentswrebetterthanme(5.改为me).iaskedthem(6.改为them)foradviceandtheytoldmetopracticemorein(7.介词inqq)qq.buteverydayafterthatiwouldspendonehourpracticing(8.原来那个词不对)oralenglishonqq.daybydayllearned(9.去form)manyusefulwordsandexpressions.astimegoes(10.一般是这样的)by,ifoundthaticouldevencommunicatewith(11.加witn)somecollegestudentsfreely.   找到11处,不过7.可能不是的
杜彦芬回答:
  onedayihappentofindachattingroominmyqq.happen->happened   therepeoplewerechattinginenglish.itriedto   chatwithsomeofthem.tomysurprised,ifoundsurprised—>surprise   theoralenglishofsomejuniorstudentswrejunior->senior   betterthanmine.iaskedhimforadviceandhim->them   theytoldmetopracticemoreonqq.buteverybut->so   dayafterthatiwouldspendonehourmuoralhour后加on   englishonqq.daybydayllearnedformmanyonqq->inqq去掉from   usefulwordsandexpressions.astimegoinggoing->goes   by,ifoundthaticouldevencommunicatecommunicate后加with   somecollegestudentsfreely.
苏胜石回答:
  onedayi(happen改为happened)tofindachattingroominmyqq.(there这里是three吗,there口语表达也没错,一楼的where改也没错,是定语从句的表达,修饰room)peoplewerechattinginenglish.itried(去掉to)(chat改为chatting)withsomeofthem.tomy(surprised改为surprise,surprise是名词),ifoundtheoralenglishofsomejuniorstudentswrebetterthanmine(这里没错).iasked(him改为them)foradviceandtheytoldmetopracticemoreonqq.(but改为so)everydayafterthatiwouldspendone(hourmu改为hour)(+praticing或+on)oralenglish(on改为in)qq.daybydayllearned(去掉form)manyusefulwordsandexpressions.astime(going改为went)by,ifoundthaticouldevencommunicate(+with)somecollegestudentsfreely.   总结:   1.there处,应该是你打错了(所以不算错误)   2.tried处,trytodo是努力做,企图做   trydoing是尝试做,试着做   (这里一共两处错误)   3.surprise处,tomysurprise是固定表达,意思:令我惊讶的是,让我吃惊的是   4.him改为them因为这里指的是他们,宾语要和后面的句子一致.后面说的是they   5.but处,改为so,联系句子意思,知道是因果关系,而不是转则关系   6.hourmu改为hour是你打错了(不算错误)   7.+praticing或+on处,spendtimeonsth或spendtimedoingsth是固定表达   8.learned处,learn+sth学习某物   9.gonging处,astimegoesby和astimewentby是固定表达,因为是过去式,所以用后者.   10.+with处,communicatewith是和XX人交流的意思.固定表达.   以上10点,1和6是你打错了,不算.2处共有两处错误.   所以一共刚好10处错误
刘秉毅回答:
  happeningthireschatingsurprisesstudents'sadviced(to)去掉   learnedtogoesevencould
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