英文信可以这样写:
towhoitmayconcern:
Weareachinesemetalproductscompany,wesincerelyhopetohavethecooperationwithyouesteemedcompany.Perhapsyoumayhavecooperativepartnerscurrently.butifwecanoffertoprovidemorefavourableprizeandbetterqualityoftheproduct.itmaywillbeaanotheralternativeforyou.
Ourproduct:
1,Allkindsoflapelpins,
2,Keychains,PVCkeychains,
3,Badges,medallions,coins,
4,Moneyclips,cufflinks,pursehook,
5,wristband,lanyard,
6,bucklebelt,dogtags,nameplate.
pleaseletmeintroducemycompany,thecompanyislocatedinthebaseofChinesemetalproducts,XiaoLan.thereare400staffs,andpossessesprofessionaldesign,manufacturingteam.thecompanyisestablishedsince7yearsago,andweareseekthepotentialcustomerswhilewekeepingthegoodrelationwiththepartners.
yourearliestreactionwillbehighlyappreciated!
Sincerelyyours,
SIMONCAO
MarketingManager(得给自己起个头衔,对老外的商业交流要正规)
MSN:333333,
E-mail:————————
QQ:就免了,老外谁用啊
(再加上你们公司的联系电话,传真,地址,这个是英文商务书信的基本要求)
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大哥啊,还要怎么样啊,
我经常写商务英文书信
就你的原文意思,写出来够不错的了
看在你开拓海外市场的份上,帮你写的
我也是奋战在海外的华人啊
不是每个人都有我这么热心+正好是专业滴