第二个的一堆语法错误哦.
还是我来帮帮你吧.
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自己写的.再说下,我是一个初三女生,英语很擅长.虽然楼上的说自己是高三的,但不可信哦,很多低级的错误.赫赫,指出来而已,没有别的意思,比如说第三人称单数的问题.还是相信我好拉.