150字太少了,表达不了多少东西.以下是我写的,希望你多提意见. 　　Englishlearningisviewedasabasicknowledgeforamodernwell-educatedcitizenafterthestatepolicyofreformandopeninguptotheoutsideworld.ButdoesitreallymattertolearnEnglishwell? 　　Havingreceivedhighereducationandexperiencedstrictskilltraining,mostofuswilltakeupsomewhatcomplexandinnovativejobs,inwhichagreatmasterofEnglishisessential.Ontheotherhand,agoodknowledgeofEnglishleadstoacomprehensiveunderstandingaboutforeignhistoryandculture,withwhichourcountrywillcollaborateandreachcommongroundwithothercountriesmoresmoothly. 　　However,itisimpropriatetodevoteourwholetimelearningEnglish.StudentswhotakealltheireffortstolearnthousandsofGREwordsmostofwhichtheywillnevermeetduringthewholelifearestupid,insteadtheyshouldpaymoreattentionontheirmajorsortheirsocialpractice,whichwillindeedenhancetheirabilitiesandbroadtheirhorizons. 　　Inconclusion,Englishreallyspeedsupourprogress,butitisjustoneskillweshouldmasterduringourlife.Itisimpropriatetoemphasizeittoomuch. 　　（175words） 　　其实我一开始写得太多了,我删减后才缩到170字左右的,以下是我的原文,也希望能对你有启发. 　　Englishlearning,towhichthewholenationhasattachedgreatimportance,isviewedasabasicknowledgeforamodernwell-educatedcitizen,especiallyuscollegestudents,afterthestatepolicyofreformandopeninguptotheoutsideworld.However,doesitreallymattertolearnEnglishwell?Ifsohowdoesitcontributetoourprogress?Ifnotwhat’sthedisadvantage?Iwillshowmyopinionsofthesequestions. 　　Havingreceivedhighereducationandexperiencedstrictskilltraining,mostofuswilltakeupsomewhatcomplexandinnovativejobs,inwhichagreatmasterofEnglishisessential.ResearchhasshownthatitisEnglishratherthanourspecialprofessionalknowledgethattouchesoureverydaywork.EngineerswillconsultmanualswritteninEnglish,whereassecretarieshavetosendEnglishcommerciale-mailstoforeignpartnersorcustomers.ThereisstillsomeonenegotiatingwithforeignersinexactandfluentEnglish. 　　AgoodknowledgeofEnglishleadstoacomprehensiveunderstandingaboutforeignhistory,culture,traditionandhabits,withwhichourcountrywillcollaborateandreachcommongroundwithothercountriesmoresmoothly.Ontheotherhand,itisagreatchallengetolearnEnglishwellwhichhasatotallydifferentexpressingsystemandhabitsfromourChineseandneedspersistentefforts.Overcomingit,wewillenjoyharvestofconfidenceaswellasdevelopmentofourcapabilities. 　　However,itisimpropriatetodevoteourwholetimelearningandpracticingEnglishbecausethereisstillsomeotherimportantworkweshouldtaketimetodealwith.StudentswhotakealltheireffortstolearnthousandsofGREwordsmostofwhichtheywillnevermeetduringthewholelifearestupid,insteadtheyshouldpaymoreattentionontheirmajorsortheirsocialpractice,whichwillindeedenhancetheirabilitiesandbroadtheirhorizons.Englishisjustoneskillweshouldmasterinourlife,butnotthewhole.Thereforethereisnonecessaryforeveryonetograspitwell. 　　Inconclusion,Englishspeedsupouradvancetowardsdreams,nonethelesswecan’temphasizetoomuchonit. 　　（344words）