Todayismybirthday,toohappysoIgotupveryearly,afterbreakfast,thenIwentoutshopping,inthestreetsandsmallpartnerstojoin,andthenwewillgoshoppingtogether,inthestreet,Iandsmallpartnerstoplayveryhappy,wegotothesupermarket,finegoodsshop,store,clothingstore,weboughtalotofthings,weareveryhappy
Todayismybirthday.I'mreallyexcited,soIgotupveryearly.Ihadaquickbreakfastandthengooutshopping.YesterdayIandmygoodfriendsabouttherendezvousintheparkare.Mygoodfriendsawmewishmeahappybirthday,sentabirthdaygift.Iamreallyhappy,orevenclosetotears.Wethenwentshoppingtogetherinthestreet,myfriendsandIareveryhappytoplay,wegotothesupermarket,boutique,bookshop,clothingstore.Iboughtabook,TwentyThousandLeaguesUnderthesea.Thisisaninterestingbook,Ifinallygotit.Otherpeoplealsoboughtsomeveryinterestingthings.Weareveryhappy.It'sabeautifulday!这个可以么